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Knight Of Vampires - 1st Hour

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   “Well, this is it?” Naruto asked, looking out at the huge, old, building on the other side of the gate.
   “Yeah, looks like it is,” Kira mumbled, poking the gate, “Looks safe enough.”
   “Looks creepy to me,” Choji shivered, stuffing more potato chips into his mouth.
   Kiba laughed. “Come on, it’s not that bad. Why are we here anyways?”
   “It is because the people living here are on a vacation, and they have asked for someone to watch the house for them,” Lee smiled.
   Everyone sighed, “Another useless mission.”
   Sasuke lifted his foot up and kicked the gate, which swung open with a rusty snap. When it had opened fully, one tilted on its hinges.
   “Looks like this place needs major maintenance,” Ino mumbled.
   Shikamaru yawned, “Well, I’m not doing it. They can hire someone else.”
   The large group walked up to the front door, looking at the enormous front yard. It was overgrown with weeds, and was watery like a swamp. Neji stuck the key in the lock, twisted it, and pushed the double doors open. They swung open easily, but the key was stuck in the door.
   As they had all walked inside, the door slammed behind them. Hinata, Ino, Tenten, and Sakura all screamed and grabbed someone close to them. All the boys froze. Kira pulled at the door, but it didn’t budge.
   “Well, it looks like we’re stuck in here for a while,” Kira sighed, “Anyone have the time?”
   “It’s 5 o’clock in the afternoon,” Tenten whispered, “It’s really dark though.”
   “You must feel popular Shikamaru,” Naruto laughed, “I mean; Ino and Sakura are practically clinging to you for dear life. Tenten appears to have grabbed Sasuke, and Hinata’s wrapped herself around Choji.”
   Kira smacked Naruto on the head. “Stop showing off, you dork. We know you have advanced vision already, fox face.”
   “Ow…” he moaned, “Sorry. Ow…that hurt…”
   “Wait, where’d they go?” Neji said, “I can’t see any of the girls anymore with my Byakugan. It’s like they disappeared…”
   “It’s like in one of those horror movies,” Kiba whined, “They go missing one by one, until there’s only one left, and they find everyone else is dead or something.”
   “Kiba,” Shino mumbled, “Don’t overreact.”
   “I’m not!” he piped up, “I’m nervous, that’s all!”
   “Calm down,” Sasuke barked, getting annoyed, “Let’s split up and find them. Then let’s get out of here.”
   “That’s not a good idea,” Shikamaru replied, “If we get ambushed in this huge house, a small group could get taken out and we would never know.”
   “Point made,” Neji sighed, “Let’s go.”
   The eight boys walked up the tall flight of stairs to the second level, the journey taking more time then it should have. Ten minutes later, they weren’t even half way up the stairs.
   “Why is it taking this long?” Naruto moaned, panting as he crawled up the stairs on all fours, “I didn’t think that there were this many steps.”
   “There aren’t. It’s a genjutsu,” Sasuke frowned, “We’re still on the bottom step.”
   “What? Monsters can use genjutsu?” Kiba yelped.
   Akamaru barked and Kiba growled. “I am so not afraid.”
   There was a creak and Kiba jumped, clinging to Shino. Naruto laughed hysterically.
   “Naruto, you idiot,” he scowled, “That wasn’t funny.”
   “Kiba, get off me,” Shino said, sounding agitated.
   Kiba quickly climbed of his teammate, but another creak startled him. He turned angrily to Naruto.
   “Hey!” the blond complained, “That wasn’t me this time.”
   “Of course it wasn’t him,” Sakura’s voice rang out of nowhere, “It was me. Silly boys can’t even tell the difference.”
   “Of course they can’t,” Ino’s voice replied, “Boys are so stupid. They can’t even find us.”
   “Ino, Sakura, where are you?” Choji whined, “I’m hungry.”
   “That’s to be expected,” Tenten’s voice giggled, “Well help.”
   “But boys, I wouldn’t get comfortable just yet,” Hinata’s voice added, “because there’s no reason to relax at all.”
   “What you mean by that?” Naruto asked, really confused.
   “Because,” Kira said, her voice coming from above them as the genjutsu dispersed, “We’re just getting the fun started. It would be a shame if you guys let us win too easily.”
   All the boys looked up to something that shocked them. The girls stood upside down on the ceiling above them; their eyes bring red, fangs sticking out of the corners of their mouths.
VAMPIRES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have a book report on vampires, and one of my rp charaters is a vampires, so I decided to make a fan-fiction about it.

But watch out. It's not all simple. This story has a catch. The boys have a time limit before they are trapped forever. The story starts at 5 PM on day one and ends at 5 AM the next day. Until then, they have to survive the haunted house.
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Karmena96's avatar
Cute!
Is there 2nd one???